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The Magic Box
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The Magic Box! By Humaira.
Oct 11
I will put in the box…
A ruby red balloon formed with dazzling jewels,
The scent of the most magnificent rose perfume,
The first shine of the blistering sun.
This is a poem spoken by Kit Wright. Check it out!
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
The Magic Box by Alexander
Oct 10
I will put in the box
The jucie from a freashly squesed orange from the biggest orange tree,
The beautiful cloud white fethers from a graceful swan,
The deadly jaws from a dangorus crocodile.
I will put in the box
The deadly fire breath from a varoshous dragon,
The engin from a towering 3458 foot high monster truck,
A 50 meters high dinosaur on a quad-bike.
I will put into the box
Some ice cold water what is -3562 digress farenheit from the Antartic,
A drop of water from a crystal clear river,
A twinkling star from the back of the univers.
I will put into my box
A drop of sparkeling rain,
Falling rocks crashing into the sea from a cliff,
All the coulors from an eluminous rainbow.
My box is fashioned like stars on a wooden crate,
and symbols on the sides.
The corens are hiden with ancient secrets.
I will surf in my box on the waves of the U.S.A,
Then swim in a pool.
You can hear me read my poem on this website: http//welldone.heathfieldcps.net
My box is fashioned from silver , gold and ice from a lost castle ,
With fire sparks in the corners and gold petals on the side,
The inside sounds like a baby kitten crying when its mother goes outside.
I will put in my box,
the shooting stars from the wonders of outer space, the power of a lime green Lamborghini, one shimmer of a dazzling diamond.
I will put in my box,
the mouthwatering taste of a succulent chocolate cake that makes my taste buds go wild, the sparkle of a golden penny that shines like the scorching sun, the crisp feel of a £50 note.
I will put in my box,
one drop of the crystal clear blue water, the flash of a lightning bolt zipping across the ebony night sky, the first tear of a new born baby.
My box is fashioned from
a million sparkling stars from the furthest reach of outer space. My box is decorated from all the aluminus colours of the rainbow, and secrets from far beyond in the corners.
The Magic Box. By Hannah
Oct 7
I will put in the box
a sparkling smile from the cutest kitten,
a twinkling topaz from magnificent Mars,
the smallest spark of love at first site.
I will put in the box
three ruddy wishes spoke in Spanish,
a glamorous snow flak from heaven,
a sparkal of shimering light.
I will put into the box
a simple drop of sapphire rain,
a slimy skale from a ruby dragon,
a spakaly spec of the largest star.
I will put into the box
the shimmering dimoned of truth,
the first smile of a new born baby,
the ice of a ice breathing dragon.
This is my version of The Magic Box.
I will put in the box
a dangerous crocidile’s deadly jaws,
a 50 foot high dinosaur on a quad-bike,
some ice cold water that is -3562 degrees celsius.
Vist this website : http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
The Magic Box by Rumaisa
Oct 5
Year5 been learning about The Magic Box. Click to see
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
I will put in the box:
The fragrance of the juicy fresh flower,
The shimmer of the silver star,
The first giggle of the new born baby.
My Magic Box.By Renee
Oct 5
Please take a moment to look at my poem.
I will put in my box……
A sky blue drop of water from a tropical island ,
a cowboy in a princess pink dress,
a diamond from a queens crown.
This is a hyperlink to listen to Kit Wright read his poem.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
I will put in the box the smell of pie in a heated oven,
a feirce dinosaur eating fairy cup cakes,
the blood of the worlds most scariest dragon.
Visit this website for Kit Wright: http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
In the box By Huzaifa
Oct 5
A sparkling golden penny that shines like scorching sun,
The flashing football boots of Steven Gerrad.
a deadly dragon on a shining skateboard.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
A interesting link to listen to the poem ‘the magic box’ by Kit Wright,take some time listening to him.
The magic box by Zahra
Oct 5
This poem is called the Magic Box. It was written by Kit Wright. However I tried to create my own.
I will put in my box a marble robot on a street board,
a clever girl in a old house,
a beautiful witch on a scary wand.
Here is a hyperlink leadimng to the BBC.Here you will see Kit Wright reading his poem to some children. I hope you like it.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
My magic box by Emily
Oct 5
I will put in my box,
a magic wand ,
a sound of a piano,
a shiny star,
my shiny gold bangle.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only
My magic box By Max
Oct 5
I will put in the box a shiny medal of a proud winner,
I will put in the box a magic football,
I will put in the box a cheesy pizza.
This poem is called The magic box by Kit Wright. We have been learning about his poem.
This is the link:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
The Magic Box By Aadam.
Oct 5
We have been working on a poem called The Magic Box, written by Kit Write. Why don’t you take a look at Kit’s on http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html or take a look at this one.
In my box there will be…
1. An ugly witch on a magnificent skate bored.
2. A clever boy on a supid broom.
3. A ghastly ogre on a beautiful unicorn.
1.I will put in the box
the smallest shimmer of a diamond from Mars,
the prettiest smile from the cutest kitten,
the deepest crater of the darkest side of the moon.
Listen to Kit Wright say the real version.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.htm
My Magic Box By Kate.
Oct 5
Please take a moment to look at my poem ‘The Magic Box’ by Kit Wright. After, you may click on the hyperlink.
I will put in the box…..
The poisonous venom from a deadly adder
The flash of a lightning bolt zapping the world from a distance,
The tiniest bark from the cutest dog
I will put in the box…
The beautiful swish from a horses tail,
The breif chuckle from a newborn baby,
The immense canine from a Sabre Tooth Tiger.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
My Magic Box By Alice
Oct 5
This poem is called The Magic box. It was originally written by Kit Wright, but I have tried to recreate my own version.
I will put in my box…
The swish of a scarlet scaled tail from the most dangerous dragon that ever lived,
The gleaming white claw off the giant emerald green ogre that ruled the land.
The determination of the most courageous knight that ever lived.
I will put in my box…
The last twinkle of the largest star in the galaxy,
The last bomb that dropped before the perilous World War Two ended,
The sound of a ruby red ballon bursting into the deep darkness.
Here is a hyperlink leading to the BBC. Here you will see Kit Wright reading his poem to some children. Hope you enjoy it!
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
In my box… By Huzaifa
Oct 3
In my box,
I will put the the mouth watering taste of chocolate cake making my taste buds go wild,
one drop of the crystal clear blue water from the Atlantic ocean,
the shining sword of a fearless knight,
the fire of the deadly dragon,
one shimmer of a dazzling diamond,
and a ruby red autumn leaf.
My Magic Box.By Ismail.
Oct 3
I will put in the box the succulent juicy pepperoni sitting on my favoirte pizza,
The shiny sword of an enthusiastic knight,
The fire of an fearsome dragon.
This poem is called the magic box by kit wright.We have been learning about his poem.
This is the link.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-zoes-earrings-poem-only/8840.html
In year 5 we have been learning about the magic box by Kitt Wright and we all think that the poems are very fascinating.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
Click on the hyperlink.
I will put in the magic box
the prettiest smile from the cutest kitten,
the shiny metal sword off a brave and fearsome knight,
the smell from a shiny slice of the beautiful cheesy pepperoni pizza.
The Magic Box. By Fleur
Oct 3
Please at my take a minute to look at my post.
I will put in my box…..
A beautfull bright pepperoni pizza and the smell of bubbly chease,
A shiny shield from a brave knight,
A piece of the most prettiest horse fur.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
My Magic box by Aaminah
Oct 3
In year5 we have been doing a poem called The Magic Box By Kit wright.
I will put in my box…
The swish of a scarlett – scaled tail from the most dangerous dragon that ever lived,
The first dazzle of the glistening diamond shinning like a silver penny,
The scent of the most magnificent rose perfume.
To see the actuall version please click on the website below and have a listen.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
My Magic Box By Fatema
Oct 3
I will put in the box
A special memory of the saddest person on earth.
I will put in the box
The sweetest and biggest chocolate bar.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/kit-wright-the-magic-box-poem-only/8837.html
This poem is written by kit wright.
The Magic Box by Matthew
Oct 3