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The noise echoed across the sea as a helicopter hovered effortlessly over the Pacific Ocean. Its noise was so hurrendous that I couldn’t hear myself breathe. Suddenly a shark appeared out of nowhere. One of the rescue people was dangling on the ladder. As soon as the person spotted the shark, with its razor sharp teeth and its mouth as big as a football pitch.The man tried to climb up the ladder.  But there was no luck….

The man sliped because his hands were soo slippy with fear. He slipped down into the sharks mouth. In the sharks mouth it was slippy and slimy. The man punched the inside of the shark, and suddenly he was never to be seen again…

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The shark was guided by conservationists back out to sea, were it swam away .

As the wind blew the sea, it whooshed into massive waves. Suddenly there in the water there was a glimpse of something. I decided to take a look so I went down the ladder. To my utter amazement out came a colossal shark that jumped out of nowhere. Its huge jaws were snapping away at me as I hung onto the ladder.

The gusty wind was blowing horrendously at my face. At that moment in time I was petrified, I thought that I was going to die. All types of things were running through my head. I feared for the worst. As the shark came nearer to me, it began to open its ENORMOUS mouth. He had large, pointed teeth that reminded me of a saw. Snap, snap, I knew he was hungry. Suddenly the helicopter started to fly higher, I held on. Phew! That was a lucky escape.

We noticed on the rock a person was standing, waving to us and shouted, “Help, help. We came to the rescue!

A man was standing on the bridge feeling the breeze in his hair watching the radiant sea splashing every where, not realizing he stepped on to the broken part of the bridge and fell into the sea, next to the gigantic shark. Everyone screamed !!!!

Drowning in the sea, the man’s heart started beating rapidly! He stopped breathing ,due to the fear of the shark. He felt as if his life had already ended (as if he was with god).

A helicopter had come to save the man. Grabbing the ladder, the man started breathing again. The shark could’nt have his lunch. Now the man was happy. 

                                                           BY RUMAISA

A daring air-sea rescuer saved a panicking swimmer from a man-eating shark off the coast of Blackpool today. Katy Jones (aged 10) had been playing on her lilo near the shore when a gust of wind blew her out to sea.

The ten year old said “One minute I was paddling in the sea shore, next minute me and my lilo were blown out to sea. I was petrified!”

Worried onlookers on the beach immediatly called the coast gaurd, who sent for the air-sea rescue team.

Helicopter pilot Dave Butler stated “As soon as we knew a child was in trouble at sea, the crew headed off to the rescue. However, little did we know the danger had not even begun.”

As the crew began the rescue, they became aware that a menace lurked under the waves.

“I felt so relieved to see the helicopter coming, I hadn’t noticed the black shadow beneath me.” said Katy. “The man on the winch told me to keep looking at him in the eye. Just as he plucked me from the water, the shadow lunged up bearing its deadly teeth.”

Katy had narrowly escaped the clutches of a rare visitor to British seas. The ten year old was badly shaken by her ordeal but was pleased to be back on dry land.

Katy’s mother Joyce said “We never imagined a family day out could be so dramatic! The rescue crew were so brave and we’re very grateful.”

Following the rescue, the coast guard’s boat chased the shark off into the open sea.

By Alice

For our homework last week we had to write a description. Here is mine: 

As I’m walking through the ebony forest, I smell burning wood from the direction of the horizon. Crunching through the leaves, I search around seeing what I can find.

 I can see something in the distance. Sneakily, creeping forward, I discover it is a baby unicorn. It is the most beautiful I have ever seen. With her/his shiny silver hair, and entwined single horn it is  so lovely. However, the bit I like best is the tail. The elongated, swishy tail. It is so wonderful! But then when I see her/his breath, I realize I am cold too. Somehow, I feel my spirits go down, as quick as lightning. On top of that, I am desperate for warmth.

The trees are staring down at me and making me feel petrified. Worried about all the noises I could hear (such as the squawking of the birds), I hugged myself even tighter than ever.

Shivering, I stroked the unicorn one last time, before rushing off in the leaves. Crunch, crunch, crunch… 

I would like to tell you what we (year5) have been doing in our Literacy work to do with the educational Wii game we have been playing. I am going to go all the way back to the beginning when we started playing because we have done a lot of writing since then.

As a result to our writing my teacher thinks that we have vastly improved on our writing, and have got lot more enthusiastic about it. While doing this game we have included filling a blank map of Africa. We have also written about the Serengeti using the resources of the Wii game and those were very sucsesful . Also we have written a diary about our Wii progress.

Due to the fact that not all the class could go on the game, we split in to five groups of six to do a variety of activities to do with the game. One of these activities was photographers and they had to look around the environment and take pictures  to complete our assignment. Then they wrote about what they saw and did. We had other groups, for example the Googlers researched any unknown information. Counters and spotters kept a tally chart of animals we had seen. The Note takers wrote down any interesting facts. Finally the Descriptors had to use good vocabulary to describe the settings of the Serengeti.

We then did some work in our homework books. In our homework  we had to pretend that we were the animals in the picture and I think the wii helped me to know facts about it.

Please use the wii to help your children’s writing be even better than it was before. I reccomend this game because it has helped me to think of more ideas and be imaginative. According to my teacher, I have been getting into my work more due to the fact that I want to write. I think this Wii will help your children immensly.

“Help someone this horrid crocodile has my mothers trunk”!  She was just about to give me my daily bath, and she was sucking the water into her trunk . Suddenly as she lifted her out, there was a horrible giant crocodile on it. I gasped as I was scared that she would die, but then were would I go I thought to myself? I would have no food, no where to stay. As I was thinking, my mother was bleeding from the crocodile’s teeth bites. So I put my head down and I charged at that dreaded crocodile and made him let go of her.”It worked I said out loud.” No one hurts my mother when I’m around” I shouted! I was so gobsmacked when I found out that I actually beat a gigantic crocodile.