Through the portal,regretting ever coming ,I saw the marvellous city of Atlucia.Like a jewelled crown on queen’s head,Atlucia stood proudly and magnificently on the rocky ground.When I turned round to step back through the portal,it disappeared into a dark and ebony hole.The lights in the city shone brightly like the golden penny in the sky at home.I saw large tilted towers as though they were about to fall……..
The sound of the wind whistling and the owls hooting came from every direction you turned.I heard an ear-shattering CRASH! as one of the rusty towers fell.The sound of fire exploding made me run and hide behind a bush.
I felt large spikes poking my back making me jump with fear.I ran to the castle and i Held onto the crumbling,ancient rocks.Holding onto a cold pole,Ifelt the large,gigantic boulder next to the towers wall.
All I could smell was the fresh air above me .As I walked around I noticed the sight made me want to stay in this beautiful place.The smell of the fire burning made me wonder if I was ever going to get home.
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